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Submitted: August 17, 2012
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had fun with the boobs of one of my old draws, with his smartphone : [link]
I laughed.
But it's a draw I don't really like anymore, easy to understand why. So I have drawn it once again.
It's so strange...

love 6 6

joy 3 3

~~wow 0 0~~

~~mad 0 0~~

~~sad 0 0~~

~~fear 0 0~~

~~neutral 0 0~~

~misterFISH Mar 26, 2013 Student Digital Artist

Big improvement !

~Balsamique Mar 27, 2013 Digital Artist

Thank you. Training pays soon or later

~tstar99 Dec 23, 2012 Hobbyist Artist

wow, the first one looks like anya/merilyn sekova

~suqer Dec 6, 2012

love both

~Lightninging63 Oct 29, 2012

I sort of like the striped suit. The old one just looked like a rubber suit, the new has some sort of depth to it.
That and the goldish color looks great 'round the curves.

The face looks a little older than the other, and certainly less innocent.

~Balsamique Oct 31, 2012 Digital Artist

thanks for the comment. Yes, stripes are coll for the depth. I should have done more of them.

*Forcedlactationlover Sep 30, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

While the shading, and its detail, are vastly improved on the current version, I prefer the facial expression and the apparent bust size of the earlier one. The facial expression seems more wide-eyed and innocent (or maybe, surprised) on the older pic. I prefer the un-striped suit on the older version, but that is a detail.
Both are fine works, but the new one shows definite positive development from the older one, even though the basic style remains essentially unchanged. One distinct area of improvement is in giving us more of a backgound.
One thing that might still be better is her hair. It's coming, but I think it can be better yet.

The 'eager' is to see even more, both improvement, and of your work.

~Balsamique Oct 7, 2012 Digital Artist

thanks for the critique. I quite agree. I have been a little bit fast for the last draw. I'm sure it will be better in 2016

*Forcedlactationlover Oct 7, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

Planning four years ahead? I'm lucky if I can manage one(!). However, if you can still be improving in, and for, another four years, more power to you.

=MDetector5 Sep 7, 2012 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

There is much improvement

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